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Macomb Guild of Writers and the Macomb Community College Writing Group

02 November 2010

Sense & Setting

Happy November!

The Sense & Setting exercise is all about details.
Details can be our friends, writers. Use them carefully.

Using concrete and significant details, you can say a lot about a character -

Concrete details appeal to the senses.
i.e. The old coffee was growing a greenish-white mold.
Significant details convey ideas, emotions and/or judgements.
i.e. The putrid, greenish-white mold growing out of the cold coffee cup was becoming unbearable.

For this prompt, write about a setting to reveal a character. Describe the environment using all of the senses - sight, touch, hearing, smell and taste.

I wrote about a female's bedroom. You could write about another space, such as a kitchen, a car, a garage, a basement, etc.

This need not be more than a page - around 250 words.

Good luck!

29 October 2010

Halloween Open Mic Night At Macomb Community College

I thought I'd post a couple clips of two talented writing group members reading at the Macomb Community College event given by Student Life and Leadership in P building on Thursday, 28 October, 2010.

This first video is of Milica Jokanovic, a new member of the writing group and Macomb Guild of Writers, slamming one of her pieces at the open mic night. She has a captivating style; I'd highly recommend checking this one out.


This next video is a clip of Brooke Kelley, another talented member, reading two of her pieces (one of which is published in our latest Half Book). She also put a plug in for our 9 November 2010 event before her read, so hats off to this unique and talented lady! We're happy to have her in our club.


 



As well as an open mic contest, there was a costume contest, pumpkin painting, and free pizza and soda at the event. Below is a photo of the pumpkin painting table.

26 October 2010

SPOTLIGHT: Professor Clark Iverson

Quote from President Jenifer DeBellis:
"Professor Clark Iverson, aka Professor Top Hat, was a natural choice for faculty advisor when the founding officers were developing MCC's Writing Club. His commitment and interaction within this organization have contributed to the overall success of the club. Whether he is leading a writing exercise during a meeting, contributing to the open discussions, or simply counseling the officers behind the scenes, his guidance and contributions are highly valued. Professor Iverson is an invaluable asset to this discourse community."

Q: Officially, you are the faculty advisor to the writing group at Macomb Community College. What does that mean to you?

Part of what it means is simply bureaucratic. Beyond that, it means an opportunity for advice and mentoring, since the writing club converges with my area of professional expertise.

Q: What happened on the day Cathy approached you with the idea of writing group?

I cannot remember the details clearly, but I remember being happy about it.

Q: Members who may not have otherwise been published have been featured in other publications along with the Half Books. How does this make you feel, and what do you think it says about the writing group?

I am very pleased that those members are getting the experience, beyond the creative practice, of submitting their pieces. Also, the production of the Half Books is just a marvelously inspired project. It tells me that the group is very healthy and that the movers and shakers within it are remarkably self-motivated. It all makes me feel enraged. No, wait. It all makes me feel happy for the young people becoming active in the artistic community, and at times a tiny bit proud.

Q: You're an admired professor here on campus. What's the best part of your job? The worst part? Would you recommend teaching as a career?

The best part of my job is simply the teaching. That is why I wanted to be at a community college instead of a university, where research and the publish-or-perish rat race take priority. I believe in undergraduate teaching, and that’s what I like. Within that practice, I like students who listen to me and work hard. 

The worst part is dealing with plagiarism. I regard it as a betrayal of learning and as something that ultimately harms civilization.

As for recommending teaching as a career, the answer is a qualified yes. It’s not for everybody, and you certainly don’t become an educator in order to get rich. For those who love ideas and who want a more thoughtful world, it’s a good profession.

Q: The other day I was in a class that shall not be named for purposes of keeping my reputation intact and a fellow student who took a class of yours referred to you as "The Top Hat Guy." How do you feel about this label?

I think the label is a little silly, but it doesn’t bother me. What concerns me more is that a student took a class from me yet afterwards still focused on my attire instead of ideas from the course.

Q: What inspires you?

Inspiration comes from a constantly shifting cornucopia. At the moment I’ll limit the list to Gluttony, Rage, Lust, Sloth, Envy, Pride, and Avarice.

Q; Do you have any advice for aspiring writers? Advice for anyone who aspires to something?

Yes to both.
To aspiring writers: pay your dues. Write a lot. Be good readers. Care more about your craft than about getting your feelings validated. Stick with it.
To anyone: the learning never stops. You aren’t out of the woods yet, so enjoy the woods. 

Flash! Fiction.

The Individual Elements Prompt/Flash Fiction Exercise we introduced at the last meeting will be a learning experience for you writers.

You must remember that with only 150 words to spare - you do not have the time to introduce everything and everyone. It is acceptable to start in the middle of the action/scenario.

You must include the elements we voted on at the meeting - - -

Characters: Female Acrobat, Male Detective, Male Poet
Setting/Environment: Cruise Ship
Foil: Holiday

If you have any questions, any of the board members would be happy to answer them. My email is zavichl@aol.com

Get writing.

20 October 2010

Creative Reading Photos Courtesy of Leigh C. Grant

Leigh C. Grant, a professor at Macomb Community College, was our feature reader.


22 September 2010

NPR Three-Minute Fiction Contest Round Five

"Hey MCC Writing Club members, check this link out. Even if you don't have time to get this done before the Sunday deadline, challenge yourself to the prompt. All qualifying submissions received within the next week will be published in a "Some People Swore that the House Was Haunted Half Book." What are you waiting for? Get me tho...se stories!" ~ President Jenifer DeBellis (Compliments of JensHead Publications. Submissions may be posted in this forum via blog, redbubble, or deviantart link, or emailed to macombguildofwriters@gmail.com)



Official Contest Rules


Submit Story Here


Here are the basic guidelines:
Your story must begin with the following line:
"Some people swore that the house was haunted."
Your story must end with this line:
"Nothing was ever the same again after that."
Including these lines, your story must be 600 words or less.
One entry per person
DEADLINE: 11:59 p.m., EDT, on Sept. 26.


C'MON GUYS... 600 measly words. Let's all get rejected together.

21 September 2010

Optional Prompt: Do You Elucubrate?

Burning the midnight oil originally meant working late into the night. (Source.)

Around the time that saying became popular, the use of the word elucubrate was common - though it really isn't used now. Henry Cockeram defined elucubrate in his 1623 The English Dictionarie: "To doe a thing by candlelight."

Here's a prompt for you. Write a poem or short story, but include:
  • Burning the midnight oil, and/or
  • Elucubrate

You can post a response here, or send me an e-mail at zavichl@aol.com

My attempt will be posted as a response. Keep in mind that this is just a prompt - it's for fun! Along with being enjoyable - writing exercises help you grow as a writer. Practice is effective... and that's a proven fact!

Happy Tuesday, writers.

18 September 2010

Critiquing Effectively, Part I

Critiquing is a valuable skill, and an important part of communication. Not only does it improve your writing, it improves your ability to write. There is a wrong way to critique, unfortunately – which is why I am going to give you a few tips that have helped me.


It is possible for you to get as much out of critiquing as the recipient of your critique. Looking at another writer’s work will encourage self-criticism – you’ll learn how to apply your newfound critiquing skills to your own work.


  • Honesty is important. As a writer, you should want to improve, and you should know that the people whose work you’re critiquing want the same thing. Lying doesn’t help you learn – and it hurts the growth of the one being critiqued as well.

  • Be constructive. If you can’t criticize with kindness and be encouraging to your fellow writers, then you should spend some time practicing this. One harsh comment could incite your fellow writer into a depression. This brings me to…

  • Develop thick skin. If you want to improve – as you should – then you need to remember that writing is a FICKLE profession. You could be a writing prodigy, but lacking the basic knowledge and proper tools, along with not being able to take criticism, can only hurt you.

  • Objectivity! You must avoid being biased – it is possible, and it is essential to improvement. It is impossible to be completely objective, but you should try to be as unbiased as possible.

  • Revise revise revise. That is what critiques are for. To make sure your best work makes it to the forefront. Don't leave things unless you are absolutely sure you want them and if a critique makes you doubt something, try and see their point of view. Bottom line is - it's your work, so if you don't want to use the suggestions, you don't have to. (Courtesy of Milica Jokanovic)


The first time you read through the piece, you shouldn’t read too intently. Getting a general impression of the writing is important. Major grammatical errors may be marked, but don’t delve too deeply into the content. Think about what stood out to you and write it down – be constructive with each remark. You can read it again after, more carefully, after you’ve acquainted yourself with the writing and style. Repetition only moves along the writing and editing process in a positive direction.


More specific things to look for: theme, word choice, form, grammar/punctuation/mechanics, setting, point of view, development, pacing, dialogue, characterization.

16 September 2010

MEMBER SPOTLIGHT: Jenifer DeBellis

Jenifer DeBellis, president of the Macomb Writing Club, couldn't be more deserving of the title. The organization started as a humble idea for fellow Macomb Community College student and Founding President Cathy Plum, and it would not be what it is without the immaculate efforts put in by Jenifer. She has spent endless time, her own money, and given her genuine heart to the one-year-old club. Thanks to her determination and devotion, the Writing Club and Macomb Guild of Writers have published five Half Books, hosted numerous events, and continue to bring together creatively gifted minds in an environment that inspires education, versatile growth, and lifelong friendship.

Q: The Writing Club and Macomb Guild of Writers have come a long way since they were first established a year ago. What were your original intentions when you began this project with Cathy?

Returning to school as a legitimately seasoned adult has been more advantageous than I dreamed possible. Not wanting to experience college life as a hit-and-run student like I did the first time around, I immediately sought out MCC’s offerings for writers. To my dismay, there weren’t any extra-curricular outlets for creative writers. But I wasn’t alone in my desire for this type of interaction. One email and phone call later – a two-hour conversation, I might add – and Cathy Plum and I could be confused for long lost friends finding each other again. And she’s not the only one: Stella (Wilfinger) Rothe and Nancy Washburn were equally as passionate about uniting for this cause.

Our combined passions and desires for these creative networks were harmonious. We planned on creating a nurturing and safe environment for aspiring writers and artists to come together, learn the tools of the trade, and inspire one another in their creative pursuits. Our intention was to grow and have fun together. The aspect of self-publishing a student publication was one dear to all of our hearts. And with Cathy’s dream of the Half Book, our baby was born.

Q: Members that may not have otherwise been published in a major publication have been featured in other publications along with the Half Books. How does this make you feel, and what do you think it says about the writing group?

Well, as part of my bio states, I am passionate about inspiring the creativity in others and watching their dreams become a reality. Encouraging other writers and artists to submit their work for publication in the Half Books, as well as steering them toward SEVERAL other submissions venues, has been so rewarding. It’s such a blessing to work with such amazingly beautiful minds, and it’s an honor to publish their work. A highlight on this note is that the 2010 spring issue of the Bac Street Journal included the works of five MCC students. It was exhilarating to be published with four of my classmates that I personally encouraged to submit to this Chicago based publication.

Q: What are you present goals for the writing group? What do you wish to accomplish?

My goals are to continue nurturing these groups with the original vision statement in mind. I am also excited about implementing peer-to-peer workshopping during club time, as well as bringing in MCC faculty members who will be sharing areas of specialty. As I prepare to transfer to OU in the winter, it is also important to me to continue structuring the bridge that spans the gap between the two networks.

Q: Of course, you would not have joined the group if you weren’t also the talented and passionate writer that you are. What inspires you? What type of writing do you do the most?

Ah, to narrow down my passions – I will do my best. I am inspired by everything! Life is one big playground of inspiration: interesting people, music, places, things… it’s hard not to be inspired into a creative mindset. I live life hard, love even harder, and see things through unique eyes.

Poetry is my strong suit and largest passion, but my love of writing short stories is evolving into a serious contender. One thing that can be said about my style is that I tend to focus in on little details, and I can’t resist painting a picture with words through unique metaphors and surreal symbolism.

Q: Along with being an exceptional student, talented writer, and cherished president of the writing group, you are also a supportive wife and dedicated mother. How do you balance it all? Do you have any advice for the students, especially ones with children?

Here is the million-dollar question! Balance is an illusion, one that can steal one’s peace if not careful. Learning how to prioritize has been a work in progress and learn-as-I-go journey. Before returning to school, I was overly dedicated to my family. This truth, combined with the distractions and change in focus, was challenging for my entire household. A year later, we have managed to work through many disappointments, rebuild relationships, and collectively establish reasonable expectations. And we are all better for the experience!

My advice to students with children is to understand there will be obstacles along the road to achieving any of their dreams. However, complete self-sacrifice is a temporary phase in a mother’s life; it isn’t healthy for anyone in the household if she remains in this position permanently. Finding ways to bridge the gap of both worlds is well worth the effort.

It’s been quite a journey. You’ve done a Herculean job with this organization, and I think every single member would agree with me when I say that as a member and a friend, you are irreplaceable. Being a part of The Macomb Guild of Writers means a great deal to me; I’m certain that I am not the only one who feels this way, and I want to congratulate you on it all.

14 September 2010

Meeting Minutes - 13 September 2010

First off – I want to thank everyone - from the heart of my bottom - that came to the Macomb Guild-of Writers meeting...

I think I'm safe in saying that the board - Jenifer Smythe DeBellis, Cathy Plum, Stella Wilfinger, Cynthia Anne Hurt, Michael Ciavone - appreciate your FABULOUS commitment.

Peer-to-Peer Workshops are about to begin!
HOMEWORK: Bring 3 hard copies of something you’re written for next week. No more than 2 pages. If you want to bring an excerpt, you are more than welcome to do so. Remember… bring your best work.

Another thing to remember… an open mind is important – not only in regards to the work of other writers, but also your own. Peer-to-Peer workshops are about improvement - providing and receiving constructive criticism. The goal is not only to improve as writers, but as readers. To be a good writer is to be a good reader... and being a good reader not only improves your knowledge, but it also helps you apply that knowledge to the craft of writing, adding to your already existent gift, style, and voice.

:)

13 September 2010

Networking for Writers: RedBubble

“EXHIBIT, BE INSPIRED & SELL”

Personally, I really enjoy this site. There is an emphasis on community, which is quite lovely. It isn’t just about sharing work. Writers and artists share thoughts, as well.

When you want to add your work, this is what you see:
Art & Photography
T-Shirts – Hoodies & Stickers
Calendars
Writing – creative writing, short stories, poems
Journal – notes, announcements, how-tos

The range of art is immense, and the talent is surprising at first. I have read some of the most wonderful poetry on this site.

The only thing I could criticize is the lack of criticism. The comments are all positive, and as a writer, what I search for is constructive criticism. (Remember, you should never, ever be completely negative when critiquing someone’s work. Always lead with a positive remark. More to come on “Critiquing Effectively…” I have much more to say on this topic.)

Nevertheless, this site had taught me a lot. Reading others' work is helpful/educational to me as a writer. It opens my eyes to so many different ideas, types of writing, etc...

Members on Redbubble (that I know of... let me know if your name should be here, so I can add you to this list!):

Honorary member:
Chris1249, a writer that Jen met on Review Fuse, another social netoworking site for writers. (Review of this site coming soon!) Chris is a perfect example of how wonderful online networking can be. His work is definitely worth the time.

Vice President Stella Wilfinger says:
"RedBubble has over 1,000 groups for everything imaginable. They are very easy to join, and usually welcome 2 submissions per 24 hours (each), and MOST hold weekly features and regular challenges. 

The challenges are much easier for artists, as RB does not have a system in place yet for writing challenges. When a group does hold a writing contest, you either have to attach your work to a photograph or painting, or the contest is held in the forums. It's rare. I think that's why Jen was saying it's hard for her to be in challenges, as she has more writing up than art; I have a lot more art up than writing. 

The more groups you join, submit to, and participate in, the better your chances of having your work noticed. I am in a ton of groups and plan to join many more. I love the opportunity to get my art out there, and I adore seeing the work and tastes of others. If one person belongs to 25 groups and another to 100, guess who'll have more luck getting wins or features? You MUST be active active active to collect regular accolades."



That's RB in a written nutshell. Hopefully, it's helpful. If there is any confusion, my e-mail is zavichl@aol.com, and questions are more than welcome!

07 September 2010

Resources, Part I

Founding President Cathy Plum stressed at our last meeting that YOU CAN MAKE A CAREER OUT OF WRITING, and she could not be more right. It is important to know that as a writer, there are infinite opportunities available to you.

If you want to learn more… then pony up $139 for 8 sessions of Writing for Publication with Cathy Plum! The course is being held at Macomb Community College’s South Campus, on Mondays from 6-9 pm, beginning 25 October until 13 December of this year. This woman knows her stuff, and every ounce of her assistance is in complete earnest. The bonus of taking a course like this is the personal support. If you have the money, I highly recommend it.

The internet is also a helpful tool. I’ve been casually looking around for free things (there’s nothing I love more!) and found a few interesting sites:

  • Poewar.com is an online “Writing Career Center.” Along with an extremely informative blog (that I am quickly growing addicted to), it also provides actual job listings for writers. You don’t even have to pay money to apply. This is a gold mine, baby. Check it out!
  • Writingcareer.com has a lot of resources. I haven’t taken the time to really peruse this one, but I did download a free e-book on freelance writing that sounded really interesting. This site includes articles, blogs, even a resource link with a list of writing-related links! This is definitely worth checking out.


Important things to remember...
  1. Apply yourself. Do not get discouraged if something (or multiple things) doesn’t go your way. Pick yourself up, dust yourself off, and try, try, TRY AGAIN.
  2. Most professions out there are “fickle.” You are not the only person in this type of situation. If you love it, you will do it. You CAN do it.
  3. Before paying for any type of online writing resource, get a second opinion… at least. PLEASE… and thank you.
  4. ATTITUDE… is crucial. Love yourself, love your work… but don’t get arrogant. Stay grounded. Being narcissistic can and will hurt you.
  5. Don't be afraid.
Go forth, and write something.

I'll leave you with this Judy Garland quote: “Be a first rate version of yourself, not a second rate version of someone else.”

30 August 2010

Macomb Guild of Writers, Year II, Take I

It’s official… Cathy Plum, the fabulous founder and irreplaceable first President of the Macomb Guild of Writers is now the Founding President. The first official meeting of the second year has taken place.

President: Jenifer DeBellis
Vice President: Stella Wilfinger
Secretary/Treasurer: Cynthia Anne Hurt
Public Relations: Michael Ciavone
Faculty Advisor: Clark Iverson

Congratulations to all of you!

Homework time!
The key word this week is “bio.” Bios are important to writers. They’re written in third person, and they generally include your name, occupation, and any information that is relevant to you as a writer. This week, Cathy and Jen asked each of us to write two bios, one with 25 words, and one with 50.

Sample bio: Luisa Zavich is a Macomb Community College student on the road to becoming an English major. Along with writing, her time is often occupied with the sounds of her blue guitar, reading, and insane amounts of schoolwork. Her hopes are to become a professor and write professionally.


Other things of note…
- Vice President Stella Wilfinger mentioned community outreach is in the works for the Macomb Guild of Writers. (i.e. library readings, adult foster homes, senior centers, soup kitchens, homeless shelters, blanket drives, etc…)

- Our very own Cathy Plum is teaching a Workforce and Continuing Education class called Writing For Publication. It’s on page 41 of the booklet (I know this because I circled it and drew a smiley face next to it on my copy). Cathy is very knowledgeable, extremely helpful, and she is one of the most authentic people in the history of people. Take her class. You will learn and you will love it.

Writing for Publication with Cathy Plum:
It’s $139 for 8 sessions.
Mondays from 6-9 pm at Macomb Community College
Center Campus 8/23-10/18
OR
Mondays from 6-9 pm at Macomb Community College
South Campus 10/25-12/13

- Twyla Tharp, dancer, choreographer, and author, is going to be at Macomb Community College on 14 October 2010 at 7 pm. Tickets are $15, $5 for students, $30 for a meet and greet. Twyla wrote The Creative Habit: Learn It and Use It for Life, a book Stella brought for show and tell. It sounds like an encouraging, relevant book for you writers.

Thanks to EVERYONE for attending. :)

28 August 2010

Poetry Party...

...was truly enjoyable. Most of the audience read, and a couple members graced us with a musical performance. Macomb Guild of Writer member Michael Ciavone sang an original, along with a song called "Ghost Dance," and it was so pretty, I had to look it up when I got home. (I played "Little One," and didn't forget any of the words this time.)

The event was held at Biggby Coffee on Hall Road and Romeo Plank.

The two lovely ladies addressing the audience and participants are Jenifer DeBellis and Cathy Plum, the President and Founding President of the Macomb Guild of Writers. 

Whatever flavor you were in the mood for, this event had it. The last summer reading of 2010 showcased a wide range of styles. I'm terribly pleased to say that there were a few new faces. A profile on each member is in the works...

A little background information: The Macomb Guild of Writers was recently voted the best new club of Macomb Community College, and is open to community members as well as students.

One surprising turn of events was guitar instructor and local musician Emily Rose, who played two original songs for us (and tuned my guitar, which I very much appreciate). The talented songstress has won the  Outstanding Acoustic Songwriter award at the Detroit Music awards for the past two years, so this was a real treat.

Taken from my humble seat in the back while President Jenifer DeBellis was reading. The coffee cup in the bottom right corner is my Uncle Joe's! So awesome of him to come, especially since though I'm no Stevie Ray Vaughan.

I always have a great time at events thrown by the fabulous Macomb Guild of Writers. Can't wait until the next one.